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The Winter Weather

February 27, 2015
By Dinoshaw PLATINUM, Copperas Cove, Texas
Dinoshaw PLATINUM, Copperas Cove, Texas
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage."
~ Lao Tzu


Rugged winds pierce your skin's surface.
Hair on your arms rise, as the breeze takes you by surprise.
Your nose turns red and you start to sniffle.
At that moment you know its winter.

Warm blankets and hot chocolate warm your body.
The warmth of another warms only your heart,
As he holds you tightly, he stares right through you.


The coldness brings this reason for sorrow.
Naturally grim and blue.
As the whole world will soon turn blue,
So have you.

The winter weather,
So harsh and mean,
So lovely,

Living in a breeze of peaceful agony.



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on Nov. 16 2015 at 11:54 am
Dinoshaw PLATINUM, Copperas Cove, Texas
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage."
~ Lao Tzu

Thank you. I'm glad you took a feel for it CX

on Nov. 16 2015 at 11:53 am
Dinoshaw PLATINUM, Copperas Cove, Texas
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage."
~ Lao Tzu

Thank you very much. I wrote this poem quite some time ago, I'll go back and fix any errors I find c:

on Nov. 13 2015 at 9:26 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors, this poem is very well written. I love the description and imagery you put into each line. Great job!

on Nov. 12 2015 at 3:23 pm
WanderingCoyote BRONZE, Liberty, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have no fear of losing my life - if I have to save a koala or a crocodile or a kangaroo or a snake, mate, I will save it." -Steve Irwin

I love this poem. It's really good! The air literally turns frosty around me as I read this. Amazing work. "The hair on your arms rise as the breeze takes you by surprise" Love that part. It has a smooth flow to it.