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January 18, 2015
By Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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We held our breaths

and watched it move

around

and around

and around

a non-existant core

only to find

an error 

404: Love Not Found

© Kathryn R., Shelby, NC

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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 8:30 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Ahh, all of the feelings...
Beila BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 4:21 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

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&quot;The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco.&quot; -Mark Twain

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Thanks! I've got about a dozen pieces already written. The trouble is, I like writing way more than I do editing, so rather than finalizing those, I just keep writing. ;) Hopefully, I'll eventually get around to posting them here.
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 8:28 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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Wow, thank you SO very much for that! I hope you keep writing as well, I'll be looking forward to reading more from you :)
Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 5:56 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco.&quot; -Mark Twain

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Well, since you've created the word... join the club! Made my day to read all your positive comments and that you read and commented on "In Memory"! It's so cool to have such a talented writer like my work. :) Honestly, your "Arrest the Stars" has left me kind of starstruck (pun intended ;))--as I said before, you're a brilliant writer. I shared it with my English teacher; I wish you could have seen her jaw drop. :) I am definitely sharing your writing; keep writing and posting!
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 7:35 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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And you're awesome, daymaker!
Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2015 at 11:28 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco.&quot; -Mark Twain

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And the title has clicked. ;) You're brilliant.