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An Unfettered World

November 8, 2014
By MatchaJasmine SILVER, Delhi, Other
MatchaJasmine SILVER, Delhi, Other
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For the colors of nature

can only be orchestrated,

When we don't tack our genius.

Let us fly to the seamless sky,

and be independent birds,

Out of pound,

Without spleen

and invent, discover and create

a new untrammelled world

outside us, inside us...


The author's comments:

Nature beautifies our lives, adding color to our horizons and sky.


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dazion BRONZE said...
on Dec. 8 2016 at 1:38 pm
dazion BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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i like how u used your wordplay in this poem it was interesting to me and it was short and sweet

on Oct. 29 2016 at 9:58 am
gayatrielliot BRONZE, Delhi , Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The autumn leaves are a riot of color. They remind us of the good, colorful things, and their crunch beneath our shoes also bids adieu to all bad things that have long gone,"

Please check out my work and comment!

David1738 GOLD said...
on May. 24 2016 at 9:26 am
David1738 GOLD, Yardley, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Its not over till you say its over

very pretty love it continue the great work!

bambino143 said...
on Apr. 15 2016 at 9:11 am
bambino143,
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i think it is very beautiful i hope you will learn to fly.

Amalia said...
on Mar. 30 2016 at 4:05 pm
Amalia, Gradville, Michigan
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I like this idea and I like the metaphorical meaning involved in the poem, maybe you could add a little more so the reader has more to enjoy. Really Good!

on Jan. 20 2016 at 1:15 am
ncarolyn SILVER, Mission Hills, California
8 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
winning is every girls dream. But it's my destiny and dream

metaphorically beautiful

on Jan. 8 2016 at 2:14 pm
natnatnat01 SILVER, Budapest, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Because like a cat, sometimes I need to die eight times to realise this time it really counts."

Love it! So short but at the same time says so much.

sniper1012 said...
on Jan. 7 2016 at 12:08 pm
sniper1012,
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I love the out doores

JennyR. said...
on Sep. 22 2015 at 11:35 am
JennyR., New York, New York
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good work!

on Sep. 19 2015 at 12:42 am
mems.victoria BRONZE, McMinnville, Tennessee
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Very, very beautiful, just like nature!

on Aug. 26 2015 at 9:36 am
Qudsia PLATINUM, Aligarh, Other
26 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
bravest of you are not those who can defeat a lion but the ones who can defeat anger

Nice poetry. check out your fellow indian's work.

on Jul. 28 2015 at 11:55 am
Really awesome

on Jun. 12 2015 at 1:29 am
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

This is just plain cools. I love poetry about nature. The call to reveling in it's beauty is immensely tempting, and I find myself wishing I were in one of my favorite little hide-aways by a lake. Well done, my friend. Peace!

on Apr. 5 2015 at 9:18 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

You are very talented! Keep writing!

Katy29 said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 11:33 pm
Really good!

on Mar. 19 2015 at 5:52 am
Iamwhoiam17 GOLD, Lake City Fl, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Just be yourself,if you are happy that's all that matter's.

I really love the way it was written! :) Great job!

David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 12:03 pm
David14, Faridabad, Other
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I believe it 2oooooo!

David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 11:57 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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Same here!

David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 11:53 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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really like your poems!

David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 2:29 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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Nice piece of writing, Jasmine11!