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October 13, 2014
By TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”


Here I was again,

Soaked in my own vile,

Of altramentous silhouettes ,

That displayed themselves prudishly,

Yet graceless and valiant ,

On this deceitful wall of insincerity,

Again , tonight,

I was prodded and sculpted,

Harsh and rude,

Into those fancy silvery moulds,

As my fractured bones and femur potrude against my scarlet dermis,

Prominently displaying themselves,

Broken and bruised,

Beneath this tiffany teardrops,

This obnoxious shades of crimson liquids,

Were made to feel so real

And lightweight,

That I didn't realize were coursing down my coarse

Porcelain fingers,

On that rough , wounded surface.

Blotting through them subsequently,

But I wasn't numb,

Or so I was told,

I was still breathing

When the air raced into my lungs,

And When this rusty crap still beat to its own rhythm,

As they gradually cracked ,

They filled the void of silence,

Friday, 5 September, 2014 12:31:35 AM



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on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:12 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

Thanks :) And lol you are dead funny :P Seriously, and I didn't ignore it , you know I won't.

on Nov. 9 2014 at 11:45 pm
Shahrier PLATINUM, Colma, California
28 articles 10 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm a river that no longer flows" - a friend
"when the people lead, leaders follow" - Gandhi

wow.
my comment has to be 10 charecters long, so this second sentence is something you can totally ignore because its onlu a space filler