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Winter girl

October 5, 2014
By XxSmilesxX GOLD, Thomasville, Georgia
XxSmilesxX GOLD, Thomasville, Georgia
15 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Depression is like a war, you either win, or die trying.


You can feel the wind blowing through your fragile bones

cold, it blows, soft...

Yet so harsh,

But youre a winter girl

cold as ice, thin to the bone

You can feel the sun beaming throgh transparent skin

hot, it beams, gentle...

yet so harsh,

But youre a winter girl

cold as ice, thin to the bone



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on Oct. 26 2014 at 6:16 pm
bruisedmemories ELITE, Birdsboro, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"When you're young, you can fly, but we trip on clouds 'cause we get too high" -The Band Perry (Song: Don't Let Me Be Lonely)
"Cause no matter what, you'll never be alone" -Lady Antebellum (Song: Compass)

Ah I love this! It reminded me of Larie Halse Anderson's book also. I loved that book and your poem! It's very good! Keep writing! Rated 5/5

on Oct. 14 2014 at 7:26 pm
XxSmilesxX GOLD, Thomasville, Georgia
15 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Depression is like a war, you either win, or die trying.

YES! And thanks so much for your feedback!(:

on Oct. 14 2014 at 6:47 pm
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE, New Castle, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I write only because
there is a voice within me
that will not be still."
~ SYLVIA PLATH

(MY FORMER ACCOUNTS: Icantwrite & Punk.Snowflake)
Published poems from my former accounts:
- FRAIL HOPE (Icantwrite)
- YOURSELF (Punk.Snowflake)

Very emotional, very chilling poem of yours. This reminds me of anorexia and the book Wintergirls (by Laurie Halse Anderson). Was the book maybe what inspired you to write this? Either way, it beautiful and sad, and I love it! :)