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Her Violin

May 20, 2014
By Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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Nimble fingers fly
Upon the gilded strings
Yielding to the beauty
Of emotive melodies.


The bow strokes the chord
A sigh of ecstasy
Breathes into the air
Erasing enmity.


Her softly swaying dance
A fluid flowing stream
From the pressing of a chord
To the humming of a string.


Its magic twirls the air
Awakening in dreams
Soothing stormy minds
And evoking memories.

© Betty L., Fremont, CA

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I play the violin and I must say it is the world's most beautiful (and hardest to play) instrument.

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This article has 24 comments.

celticstudygirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2015 at 11:41 pm
celticstudygirl PLATINUM, Vermilion, Other
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I love this lovely poem! I love the violin and love people who can play it. I want to learn how to play it one day.
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 7 2015 at 8:32 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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XD love it it's totally a song in its own way XD another like, and I added it to my faves too
bookmaniac PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2014 at 1:49 am
bookmaniac PLATINUM, Issaquah, Washington
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This is such a lovely poem! The imagery is just fantastic. I used to play violin and your poem fully captures the instrument's beauty. Bravo!
WritinGirl PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2014 at 10:07 am
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
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Will is way better!!!!!!!!!!!! :P
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2014 at 8:33 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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LUV halt!!!
WritinGirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 1:48 pm
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
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whoa, sorry, i know  this is not about the poem (which is spectacular) but i just  looked at your page and saw you like Ranger's Apprentice!! I LOVE that series!! (and archery) sorry, I just was so elated I had to inform you. Who do you like better, halt or will? Anways, back to  the poem...
writing.is.my.life. SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 6:05 pm
writing.is.my.life. SILVER, Newburgh, New York
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This is really pretty!
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 4:43 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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thank you^^
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 23 2014 at 8:06 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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I love your wording throughout this poem: "From the pressing of a chord, to the humming of a string..." It's just elegantly put. I love the sound of violins, and you captured its beauty perfectly.
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jun. 10 2014 at 2:01 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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Thank you so much^^
AuthorArsh BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2014 at 3:34 am
AuthorArsh BRONZE, Akola, Other
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I know nothing about playing a violin. But this poem was really beautiful and well put. Great work!
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2014 at 4:42 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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hahahaha i would luv to do a duet!^^
HelloImVin BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2014 at 9:57 am
HelloImVin BRONZE, Ardsley, New York
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This is beautiful. I also enjoy playing violin. Maybe we can meet up one day and play together. ;) Lmk. Xo, Vin
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on May. 29 2014 at 9:05 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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thank you^^
taliamaee BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2014 at 9:03 pm
taliamaee BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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LOVE. i literally feel like i'm playing with you.
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2014 at 9:02 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Lovely! Just lovely!!
WritinGirl PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2014 at 9:52 pm
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
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i kow. I'm actually a violinist too, and although i didn't say this, i thought you captured the beauty of the instrument so well. 
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on May. 28 2014 at 6:24 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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thank you so much^^
Psuedonymous_Walsh said...
on May. 28 2014 at 5:24 pm
Psuedonymous_Walsh, Taylorsville, Utah
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^w^ Being a violinist, that was awesome! I absolutely LOVED the intricate wording you used to describe such beauty! Music truly has power, much like the words of this poem. 
WritinGirl PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2014 at 9:07 pm
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
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I mean it. Hey, kind of off topic, have u read any of my stories by any chance? It's just I'm kind of new to teen ink, and I really really really want to know what people think of my stories/poems. You totes don't have too, it would just be super uper awesome! :)