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Confusion

May 4, 2014
By TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown


The sky hiding from sunlight
The trees whispering accusations
Her hair whipping her skin

The girl sprinted
Without a reason
Between the trees
Through the brush
In the darkness
Of her spirit



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on Jun. 7 2014 at 10:56 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Thank you so much! It seemed sort of vague to me but I guess it turned out alright. (:

on Jun. 7 2014 at 11:20 am
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

I agree with WOWriting and HayatC, the amount of meaning you've managed to pack into this poem is incredible! I wish I could do that! Five stars

on Jun. 3 2014 at 6:53 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Thanks so much!

on Jun. 3 2014 at 11:30 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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I love this. Full of meaning, like HayatC. said and I really like the 'trees whispering accusations' part. I get so bored of the same old 'the trees whispered in the wind' and the like, so this is fresh and great :)

on Jun. 1 2014 at 12:44 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

on May. 14 2014 at 12:31 pm
HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one."

I loved how this was short but PACKED with meaning, I really loved it!