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A Cannibal In Love MAG

November 16, 2008
By ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
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ZiXiang Zhang SILVER, Ridgewood, New York
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I want to make a feast out of you
your fat swollen chops would be great
nourishment for my lovesick mind
your savory lips pack the flaky crunch
that goes
perfectly with crimson molasses like my
dear honey bear draining the life out of its belly
oh yes! the belly!
my tongue yearns for medium rare sausages …
your tubular will do perfectly
fillets off your midsection
still fresh and perfect for sushi
won’t you say?
I can’t wait to get a bite out of you and
won’t you want a piece of me too?

© Megan B., Cincinnati, OH

The author's comments:
Ehh...I've gotten various reviews on this one and they have been quite diverse in opinions, haha...Enjoy!
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Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 1:49 pm
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

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I love this! It's creepy, just like me.....:0
iWrite2 SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 9:38 am
iWrite2 SILVER, N/a, Tennessee
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niccceeee. I just read like 6 crappy poems..this one made my day =]
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 9:44 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Very cool. It conjures a vision of desparation and a distinctly disturbed mind. I love it.
CassidyMarturana BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 4:40 pm
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
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This made me smile because at first I couldn't tell if you were being serious or not. Hahaha, love it! XD
KaileeM BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 12:42 pm
KaileeM BRONZE, Magnolia, New Jersey
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that was absolutly amazing. keep writing!!! please
Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 10:42 am
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Fantastically disturbing! I LOVE it!
asofnow GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 5:10 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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im prob gonna say want a lot of ppl hav said. this was honestly disturbing, check out my wrk if u can.
CanNeverHoldMeBack GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2011 at 12:34 pm
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snarky much? hahaha i like
RandyR BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:43 am
RandyR BRONZE, Andver, Massachusetts
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This has good descriptions but is a bit disturbing and weird.
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I love it! Its diffrent and not the same as other poems were its sweet and calm this ones special and more upbeat or something. i love it!!

*GamerGirl*

_MissLaurel_ BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 3:12 pm
_MissLaurel_ BRONZE, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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It is very unique, something I strive for, and though it was disturbing I'm sure that was intended. :) Very Hannibal Lector.

~Laurel

sleepyloon BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 10:35 pm
sleepyloon BRONZE, Wilsonville, Oregon
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I like the premise, but it's not a very sophisticated piece of writing.
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 1:18 pm
Strawberrysunshine22 GOLD, Askov, Minnesota
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Its not over till its over

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WOW that is Awesomely unique lol very interesting :)
jh6-4ever SILVER said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 4:16 pm
jh6-4ever SILVER, Cornish Flat, New Hampshire
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Wow, this is really creepy! But i love it. The moment i started reading i wanted it to end, yet at the same time, i couldnt get enough! great work.
MeanPeopleDead SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:02 am
MeanPeopleDead SILVER, Rouseville, Pennsylvania
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Hannibal Lector?
Rose said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 10:39 am

i freaking love it!!!

 

mskullgirl GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 4:00 pm
mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
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Ok this is just strange. Sorry
cupcake420 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 8:33 pm
cupcake420 BRONZE, Hdj, Texas
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i loveee this and i thin the same thing tjis poem is amazeing
ashpooh1108 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 5:36 pm
ashpooh1108 BRONZE, Daytona Beach, Florida
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I'm kind of confused on the meaning of the poem. Even though it kept me wanting more, I was still confused on what you were meaning to talk about in the poem. 
fragileblackorchid SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:47 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
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People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

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love this poem, love how it explains even the worst of people can fall in love its also dark and mysterious lol i luv yer poem!