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Brown Eyes

January 15, 2014
By EmLikesWords GOLD, Norwood Young America, Minnesota
EmLikesWords GOLD, Norwood Young America, Minnesota
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I have a deep love,
for boys with brown eyes,
those eyes, how they glisten,
like stars in the skies.
They pull you right in,
so dark, almost black,
their warmth, it fools you,
they make their attack.
He'll break you to pieces,
he'll tear you to bits,
but you can't blame those eyes,
those eyes you can't resist.
So deep, they can stare,
right into your soul,
it's blissful at first,
but it does take its toll.
Love can be fun,
until it just hurts,
when lust is your entrée,
and pain, your dessert.
Be careful, young girls,
and I'll tell you why:
he will make you laugh,
but he will make you cry.
Unless you are strong,
I wouldn't advise,
that you fall in love,
with a boy with brown eyes.



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on Feb. 20 2015 at 9:32 pm
DragonWriter11 GOLD, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"The only person in this world who can write your life story is you. Don't hand the pen over to someone else just because they made one chapter miserable."

Wow!!! That was amazing!!! I loved it because your words formed a picture in my mind, and I just love it when pieces of writing do that!!! :)