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White December

November 27, 2013
By heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele


Rain, rain go away
The snow is here again today
Coming down like twinkling embers
Moving toward a white December

Blanket the ground
With your soft subtle flurries
Freeze the roads over
For people who are in hurries

Dancing flames keep us warm
Inside a shelter in our home
Shielded from the frigid cold
To the air my heart is sold



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on Dec. 4 2013 at 9:50 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

PLEASE DO! Send a picture of it to me though! :D  

Blynn SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2013 at 8:40 pm
Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
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I really like this, the idea of this, but some of it sound childish, like the second stanza. Good job though! I think you could improve it

on Dec. 3 2013 at 10:42 am
Lullabymidnight BRONZE, Ailey, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life's not about waiting out the storm, But learning how to dance in the rain.

OMG!!! can i steal this??!!!! i wanna put it up in my room!

on Dec. 3 2013 at 4:04 am
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
210 articles 11 photos 50 comments
well, you DESERVE it

on Dec. 2 2013 at 10:37 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

Thank you! :D

on Dec. 2 2013 at 9:51 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

I appreciate the feedback! :D

on Dec. 2 2013 at 9:51 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

Thank you!

on Dec. 2 2013 at 9:51 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

Wow, thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

on Dec. 2 2013 at 3:49 am
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
210 articles 11 photos 50 comments
i felt cold when i read it...it's so great  

on Dec. 1 2013 at 6:20 pm
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

My dream is to get in the mag!! :D

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2013 at 6:18 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Great poem!

on Dec. 1 2013 at 3:33 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I like what you did with the rhyme scheme and the December theme. Hope this makes the magazine! Nice work. :D

on Dec. 1 2013 at 1:49 pm
feychild21 BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you do makes a difference, and it's up to you to decide what kind of difference you're going to make" - Jane Goodall

This makes me want Christmas! :) I also like how you place descriptions of fire and snow next to eachother, great job!

lazania BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2013 at 1:34 pm
lazania BRONZE, Augusta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, because even if you miss, you'll land among the stars

i love this!!!

on Dec. 1 2013 at 12:17 pm
Jadesnewgroove PLATINUM, Dry Ridge, Kentucky
23 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
She may have been there for you in the aftermath, but I was there for you when it all came crashing down.-Megan Duke

This is a really good piece!