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At the Park MAG

October 8, 2008
By Carolina SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
Carolina SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
8 articles 3 photos 32 comments

When I went to the park today,
Two little children came to play.
They played hide and go seek
behind the trees
Running and screaming
in delight.
After dunking their heads and feet
under the cold fountain,
they leave the faucet on
and walk away.
The little girl runs to catch up
with her brother,
pigtails flying,
and I get up to
turn off the faucet.


The author's comments:
This poem created at a park near my house.

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on Aug. 4 2009 at 12:20 am
Carolina SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
8 articles 3 photos 32 comments
Thank you so much! You are a very good writer, too. I love how you are so bold and express your faith. That takes courage that most don't have. Please keep writing!

on Jul. 29 2009 at 8:06 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I love this poem!!! You are very talented! I just had my first poem ever written posted on, and I must say that your work, probally is better than mine! Congrats on getting into the TeenInk Mag! You diserved it!!!