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"Nothings Wrong"

September 5, 2013
By GinaT14 SILVER, Glendale, California
GinaT14 SILVER, Glendale, California
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You stay there smiling,
Laughing with your friends,
"Nothings wrong" you told them,
"Nothing at all"

You all knew it was a lie
A lie told daily
Why cant we just break out of our shells
and be real

You know you're sad
You know you're mad
You don't wanna hurt others
Only want to hurt yourself instead

You wanna jump off
And break open your head
Never wanna wake up you said,
But they all want you to
They don't wanna loose you too

They try to convince you
Everyday of your life
But instead you just put up a fight
And that's how you took that flight
The flight off that building top

No one knew it was you
Until they came running to you
Crying for you,
Screaming for you,
You're not responding
never going to

you're gone and they know it,
They're sad inside
Cuz you're not alive
Now you're gone forever.
Why couldn't I say bye...

I love you



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GinaT14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2013 at 2:23 am
GinaT14 SILVER, Glendale, California
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Thank you so much. This makes me so happy

Csquared GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2013 at 9:06 pm
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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This piece is so powerful! I love the twist at the end. It is so clever! Plus, it completely changes both the perspective and mood of the poem.

GinaT14 SILVER said...
on Sep. 6 2013 at 7:16 pm
GinaT14 SILVER, Glendale, California
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Wow thank you that means a lot.

on Sep. 6 2013 at 1:11 pm
Mc_poetry BRONZE, Wellington, Florida
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beautiful! loved it