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A Love Note

July 4, 2013
By darkerthanblack GOLD, Dhaka, Other
darkerthanblack GOLD, Dhaka, Other
12 articles 4 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
fight weakness or perish

There was woman and man so in love that they fought the world to find their peace. But, then the parents of the guy had other plans. The guy's parents murdered his love.

She was there lying,
Affixed and affianced to death.
The meteoric sky turning

Grey, darker, darker than black.
As the light left the heaven,
They said the stars are fake,
They said the stars are taken.

I see a new star,
I knew my fake star had awaken.

After the chapter of hell verse
After the demise of such curse
I leave my world to you
A note that I want you to view,
Blunting the stab of hatred
I want to shout the truth
And afresh the bond so sacred,

So, so much hatred?

The note said...............................

Love is strong, when love is blind,
Love is loss, when loves unbind,
Love is fair, when love is sight,
Love is light, when you knew its right.

They thought they were right,
Eventually, they had gone so far
They thought of battle,
They won the battle but lost the war.

For some love is amusement arcade,
Some short-lived, as soon as they come the faster

they fade.
Ambiguous is love,
Love is a facade.

Is love a contort, forbidden trade?

Like a candle light's shadow
Invisible, a miracle,
So true,
Isn't it a beautiful parade?

The author's comments:
Nothing inspired me actually, it just popped into my head. But i thing the love quotes are quite well, what say?

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This article has 3 comments.

on Nov. 25 2014 at 1:27 am
darkerthanblack GOLD, Dhaka, Other
12 articles 4 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
fight weakness or perish

i have really missed u. U r right. awesome minds think the same. cant wait to chat with u again. read more of ur works. all encourage me to write more and more. u rock on too.

on Jul. 31 2013 at 4:14 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Hey Darkie!! Long time no talk! Lexus told me that you were looking for me so here i am! I was away sorry.....I missed you though!!! So anyway, the peom is awesome and I absolutly love the letter. this is adorable. It sounds like my poem, the vows, we even used the same picture!! (Awesome minds think alike!) So, hope everythings awesome on your end! Please reply asap! Keep rockin Darkie

on Jul. 20 2013 at 12:41 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

nice, too good