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Unending War

April 14, 2013
By Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
17 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything that is done in the world is done by hope.


Night dawns on the land,
For the light has gone.
The men have dropped their weapons,
If only for a moment.

And though tomorrow brings more strife,
More innocent blood shed,
And more guilty blood born,
For now there is peace.

If only it would last.



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on Sep. 15 2013 at 6:19 am
BlackbeltJames GOLD, Reading, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Isaac Asimov - "Intelligence is an accident of evolution, and not necessarily an advantage.”

It is simplistic and easy to understand so it conveys the message well. The description is good but sometimes it feels like you start a rythm but then completely drop it in the next line. You use a variety of simple and more complicated language in order to aid your descriptions and you end it nicely to give an impact on the reader. Its good, well done.

on Aug. 29 2013 at 10:28 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

This is a chilling & amazing poem. I feel like you really got the point across... I love that you were able to get such a huge point across in so few words. Great job!

OldYoungOne said...
on May. 8 2013 at 7:23 pm
Fairly simple words message that is universal to the world

Netnel GOLD said...
on May. 3 2013 at 1:13 pm
Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
17 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything that is done in the world is done by hope.

The world is in an endless turmoil. It has one day of peace and bliss but that day is too short.