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Unfair Hand

March 25, 2013
By SecretAngel PLATINUM, Union City, Ohio
SecretAngel PLATINUM, Union City, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We come screaming into this world, how could we possibly live it without a fight."


I have been dealt an unfair hand,
when I am falling I fear where I may land.
Will I land on my feet or my face,
will my heart ache and break,
for mercies sake will I wake?



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x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 5:19 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Its so amazing the last stanza really......."Took me" In A word completely brilant!!!!!! I Also write poetry.... But yours spoke volumes that,almost lead me to tears 

on Apr. 3 2013 at 8:18 pm
SecretAngel PLATINUM, Union City, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We come screaming into this world, how could we possibly live it without a fight."

thank you, im new at showing people my poetry so i was really worried people wouldnt like them

on Apr. 3 2013 at 8:16 pm
SecretAngel PLATINUM, Union City, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We come screaming into this world, how could we possibly live it without a fight."

Thanks, i will defiantly check out your poetry

on Apr. 3 2013 at 6:24 pm
lexi.smith13 PLATINUM, Brownfield, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"A house divided against itself cannot stand" - Abraham Lincoln

Oh my gosh, This is amazing!! I love it!!! Wow, I write poetry also, this is one of the best pieces I have read. Even though it is short it holds a lot of meaning and I absolutely love it! Check out my poems :D

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 5:21 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

100% Amazing !!!!!!! True poetry !!! Mastpieace  Loved it,Loved it ,Loved it !!