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August 20, 2008
By VandaNoon PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
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VandaNoon PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
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what i can remember<br /> is a lot like water<br /> trickling down a page<br /> of the most beautiful colors<br /> -Marie Digby &#039;Unfold&#039;

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For wit is not wit,
Be it unspoken

And humor shall it only once be shown,
Is just a hiccup of the soul

Bravery, shall you cower in the corner?
Is it a mere consideration of your heart?

Loving kindness shall it be exhibited but once,
Is not a quality of thee

We have the qualities of the divine within us,
And we can have them all the time

But should we choose to end them,
Then the evil will entwine,
And darkness shall shine

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Rachybaby BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 9:06 pm
Rachybaby BRONZE, Lake In The Hills, Illinois
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&quot;You have to take the good with the bad, smile when you&#039;re sad, love what you&#039;ve got and remember what you had... Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret, people change, things go wrong, just remember, life goes on.&quot;

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Clever! I love the rhythem of your poem. :)

 

NatChick SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 5:26 pm
NatChick SILVER, Muskegon, Michigan
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&quot;Not everything that is faced can be changed. But nothing can be changed until it&#039;s faced.&quot;-James Baldwin

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LOVED IT!!!!
spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:19 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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5/5 good job...visit me comment and rate
NehaThakur BRONZE said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 3:17 am
NehaThakur BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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 Liked it! keep it up!
mandi caldwell GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:53 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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wow! that was really good!!! i liked it. keep writing!
Nechama SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 7:54 pm
Nechama SILVER, Longmont, Colorado
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&quot;We are born alone, we live alone, we die alone. Only through out love and friendship can we create the illusion that for the moment we&#039;re not alone.&quot; Orson Welles

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It was really good and very deep. Keep writing.
Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:41 pm
I like it. It was really good. The questions really add to the poem itself. Amazing
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 9 2009 at 6:36 pm
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Wow! This is amazing. I enjoyed it. I loved how you used rhetorical questions in this piece. It really capture my attention and I'm sure it will of others. Keep up the good work!!



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