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Saving Love

February 27, 2013
By DragonBreath_94 BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
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DragonBreath_94 BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
A girl needs to be so lost in God a guy has to seek Him to find her.<br /> <br /> &quot;I claim you in the name of the Shadow Ninja.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I love you from the depths of my black soul.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I just fell in love with you all over again!&quot;

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Decision made
Knife selected
Doors are closed
Hope's forsaken

Deep breath in
God make this fast
Let it out slow
After all it's your last

Eyes catch hand
Cold and alone
Without his fingers
Entwining your own

Blood on blood
Soul meet soul
Hearts collide
Your lips meet mine

Knife falls
Hearts are open
Hope returns
Promise unbroken

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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DragonBreath_94 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2013 at 6:03 pm
DragonBreath_94 BRONZE, Hoopeston, Illinois
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A girl needs to be so lost in God a guy has to seek Him to find her.<br /> <br /> &quot;I claim you in the name of the Shadow Ninja.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I love you from the depths of my black soul.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I just fell in love with you all over again!&quot;

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Um... quick question. Does anyone know how I can look at comments on here? 'Cause, it's telling me there are several, but I can't find them any where. If anyone could help, that'd be awesome.