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February 18, 2013
By Watson, GOLD, Billings, Montana
Watson, GOLD, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"When you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth."

-Sherlock Holmes (Sir Arthur Conan Doyle)

In my miserable world,
Black and white
Matter more than grey,
Boxes more than circles,
Straight lines more that wavy ones,
Only because
It makes sense
To not care,
And to write off,
Even when it is near impossible.
Straight lines,
And boxes,
And black,
And white,
Make it simple
To love,
Or hate,
Or ignore,
On the

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 5:27 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

You nailed this poem with the simplicity you used. I felt as though you were mocking life and the world because in a way they mock us and make us ridiculously indifferent beings, cold-hearted and numb to any good emotion. I love that.