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This is nothing special

February 10, 2013
By ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who Endure, shall be saved" Mark 13:13


This window that Ive been by,
Ive been by for quite a while,
staring at the outside world,
trying to force a smile,
but the truth is that I'm shaking,
with the tears spewing from my eyes,
I feel my heart slowly breaking,
from the depths of your lies,
id hug myself but its not real,
because it wouldn't be how your hugs feel,
Id lie to myself but it wouldn't be true, and lets be honest, I cant lie to myself like you. I feel that faith that beats in my heart,
but I try to squash it down,
because this faith is just a lie,
brought up from my frown,
I am crying silently,
because I want no one else to hear,
the pain that is from my heart,
it isn't there's to feel.
even if you came today,
you wouldn't wipe my tears,
even if you came today,
you wouldn't face your fears.


The author's comments:
Just want someone to talk to..

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on Feb. 16 2013 at 2:18 pm
ValleyMae13 GOLD, Kingsville, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who Endure, shall be saved" Mark 13:13

I cannot express my gratitude for yall reading my poetry thank yall!

on Feb. 14 2013 at 4:18 pm
SapphireLamour DIAMOND, Omaha, Nebraska
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  I know what it feels like to have silence screaming at you but you can silence the silence

on Feb. 14 2013 at 12:13 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I am redoing my bedroom, and as soon as I read this I could picture it on my walls in pretty cursive writing. Every word of this meant something for me. So beautiful and dark at the same time.

on Feb. 13 2013 at 11:10 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is honestly so amazing and relatable that I think it's the best poem I've read on teen ink so far!! I'm soooo jealous of your talent! I understand what you mean about needing someone to talk to... I will be your teen ink buddy! Lol

ValleyMae13 said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 1:05 pm
Wow thank you! Im so glad someone actually commented on my work. this is like the first :OOOOOOO