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I'll Watch Upon You

February 9, 2013
By Redhead_Squishy BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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When all is lost and nothing is found
There you'll be upon the ground
But from my place up in the sky
I'll be there with you when you cry

I've watched you grow my sweet dear child
Through all things hectic and all things mild
But it's been a long time since we lasted spoken
You're mind so lost and your heart so broken

I fear you have forgotten that I am near
Ring out your prayer, I will hear
Remember that I am not that far away
That I can prevent your days of gray

Why don't you look to me anymore
My guidance and love are forever pure
I have never turned away from you
So please just ask for that start so new

I leave you now to make a choice
To remain so hush or let out your voice
And just because I'm not there to hold you close
Does not mean I don't love you the most

So when all is lost and nothing is found
There you'll be upon the ground
But from my place up in the sky
I'll be there with you when you cry

© Susan R., Iselin, NJ

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 8 2013 at 2:00 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Maybe it could have been better for Zach; but I think—i know it's perfect. The emotion in it, especially the love, just touches me, melts me like a canlde. I wanna be like the person talking for the people I love. The first stanza is just marvelous. You're a wonderful poet. I want to read more of your work, Andrew. Please post more. And know this: no matter where I am, "I'll be there with you when you cry". ^u^
Joob-Stache GOLD said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 1:37 pm
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Wow... This was really good and I liked it a lot(: 
Zach_M said...
on Jun. 3 2013 at 4:02 pm
I read your poem, and it was good; it's just certain parts showed an imbalance of structure. You're message was fine and dandy, but I believe you should have used more metaphors and similes. Your work would have been so much better.
hotchicky101 PLATINUM said...
on May. 31 2013 at 12:55 pm
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This is truly amazing and wonderful! you should put more of your pieces on here :) i would love to read more   *kisses your cheek* You're amazing!
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2013 at 2:45 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Why is this not in the effin magazine (sorry for my words) this is just wow utterly speechless and amazing *walks away to curse this poem not being in mags*
Redhead_Squishy BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2013 at 9:12 am
Redhead_Squishy BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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thanks u all...this really means a lot to me.
RainForMe said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 4:34 pm
WOW!!! LOVE IT!!!!
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 1:22 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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OMG OMG OMG, THIS IS SO COOL! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT DIDN'T GET PUT IN THE MAGAZINE! REALLY GOOD JOB