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You Do This

November 5, 2012
By onehappyaster SILVER, Holmview, Other
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onehappyaster SILVER, Holmview, Other
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Favorite Quote:
He who does nothing does not move forward

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I've got this feeling
deep inside me
that's only there
when you're around
whether in my head
or right beside me
you make me feel this

That smile on my face
you put it there
whether it's the
thought of you or
that comment you made
your voice in my ear
baby you do it to me

That tear on my cheek
runs down my face
and falls onto the page
you caused it to begin with
when you told me you loved me
and wished you could kiss me
it falls because I miss you
I love you, my babe

© Jennae P., Kennewick, WA

The author's comments:
this is a glimpse of a very complicated long distance relationship that ended, but for a brief moment it was perfect
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