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society killed the innocence

August 23, 2012
By staffy GOLD, Courtice, Other
staffy GOLD, Courtice, Other
19 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
you were born a origianl. don't die a copy.-jason mason
i am beautiful for god makes no mistake.-Lady GaGa


She is beautiful.

The society whispers.
Look at how skinny she is.

Replies the children.
See how much she is liked.

Shouts the population.
Why are you not like her?


Magazine screams.

Change your diet.

Says the fridge.
Get better clothes.

Sing the closet.
Become skinny.

The mirror answers.

Look at her.

The hallways creaks.
She's so pretty.

A fat girl stares.
What's your number?

Boys asks in class.

Why are you in here?

Puzzles the toilet.
Never see you anymore.

Wonders the camera.
Where are you?


asked the scale.
Are you seeing your goal?


Riddles the mirror.

You need Help.

Family members whispers.
You're in so much pain.

The journal confesses.
You know you want it.

Teases the cake.
You're already not here.

Haunts the noose


The author's comments:
Our world is messed up. WE think that people in magazine are beautiful and little girls crave to be told their beautiful. Yet they only see one thing different in them and that is size. Which leads down to a very negative tunnel. People need to be aware.

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LOLOU BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2012 at 1:16 pm
LOLOU BRONZE, Mount Lebanon, Other
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
only one thing makes a dream impossible , the fear of failure !

well the issue u have presented is really good and common nowadays ! so true for bad luck anyway its a very nice piece especially the thing about dialloge...good work

on Aug. 25 2012 at 5:49 pm
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 91 comments
*job. And you're welcome. :)

staffy GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2012 at 4:40 pm
staffy GOLD, Courtice, Other
19 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
you were born a origianl. don't die a copy.-jason mason
i am beautiful for god makes no mistake.-Lady GaGa

Thank you, Yeah it's a new way of presenting personification. 

on Aug. 25 2012 at 8:40 am
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 91 comments
I love the use of personification used in this piece. Truly sensational. Great jo! :)

on Aug. 25 2012 at 2:11 am
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide

This is amazing.