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All My Fault

June 2, 2012
By winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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Everything is my fault
I do everything wrong
I try to be good
I speak my mind

I should never talk again
Every time I do
I mess things up

I say I am sorry
I try to do things right
I screw up a lot

I shouldn't be alive
I am a screw up
I lost a friend
I didn't want to loose her

It is all my fault
I wish I could take it all back
I feel like crap

Why am I like this?
I feel like crying
I feel like dying
When is it my time to die?
I am hoping it is soon
No more of screwing up


It's all my fault

© Jennifer P., Massapequa Park, NY

The author's comments:
I wrote this because this is how I feel right now. I spoke my mind and how I felt but it ruined my friend Luv and I's relationship as friends. I said sorry but she didn't say anything. I hope she forgives me and we can try to become friends again.
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winny_addams PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2013 at 2:45 am
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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thank you (:
winny_addams PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2013 at 2:45 am
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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thank you (:
gfukes GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2012 at 2:58 am
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of all the annoying morons i know, even none of them can rly say "its all my fault". so maybe it was just ur mood, b/ plse dont actually beleive that!! btw, i think the poem was good!
Hannabug GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2012 at 2:53 pm
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I can relate to this so much unfortunately... But it's a good poem!!