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May 20, 2012
By yankedoodledandy BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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When you want to be with then 24/7
When you put them first
When you think of them all the time
When you go out of your way just to be next to them

© Sean C., Princeton, IL

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Basya44 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 6:21 pm
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
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That is very sweet that you feel that way. Try using some literary elements...like imagery or metaphors. Try reading MY poem called PLUTO. It's about a painful kind of love. Maybe it will inspire you:) Nice job.
satellite23 GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 5:55 pm
satellite23 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Prove it.

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For me, this poem was too simple. Sometimes simple is good, but not in this case.

 

I should also mention that in the second line, "then" should be "them".