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May 13, 2012
By these-roses GOLD, Bristol, Indiana
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these-roses GOLD, Bristol, Indiana
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so many books, so little time

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roses sit on the table
you've had your first show
you're voice melted hearts
and now it shows
that smile
that brightens the room
that smile
the one I love,
those roses
that sit on the table
are nothing
the real gift
is you
you make the world shine brighter
brighter than the sun
I have always wanted to be you
your voice
your smile
you are a wonder of the world
those roses
are just a fraction
of what you deserve
remember that
whenever you look at those roses
you are special
and people
are going to see something
they have never seen before

© Brandon S., LaFollette, TN

The author's comments:
i wrote this for my god sister. she is going into the show business and she will need some comfort. these words took me more than an hour and a half to figure out. were to put words and how to make it flow... i put so much into this...i hope you all like it.
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