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the way you make me feel

May 10, 2012
By strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
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strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"be who you want to be. those who mind don't matter, and those that matter won't mind"
-Dr. Seuss
"be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
-Philo

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the way you make me feel is indescribable. i see you and my heart skips a beat. you smile and my breath leaves. you make my hand glued to my hand and my eyes glued to my phone. i live for your texts. when your hand holds mine, i never want to let go. when you do let go, my heart feels empty and lost. i think about you always, for you never leave my mind. i sit in your sweatshirt and can almost feel your warmth around me, but it doesn't compare to your hugs. nothing compares to your hugs..

© Mary Claire J., Wichita Falls, TX

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strongernow SILVER said...
on May. 30 2012 at 11:59 am
strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"be who you want to be. those who mind don't matter, and those that matter won't mind"
-Dr. Seuss
"be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
-Philo

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why thank you :) i'll most deffinetly work on my spacing! hehe
strongernow SILVER said...
on May. 23 2012 at 1:50 pm
strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"be who you want to be. those who mind don't matter, and those that matter won't mind"
-Dr. Seuss
"be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
-Philo

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its supposed to be "phone glued to my hand, and eyes glued to my phone".. lol
DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 22 2012 at 6:43 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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I really liked the your poem. It was very intersting. The only thing i suggest is maybe spacing out your lines and putting a little bit emotion when you were talking about the "sweatshirt part" that was really cool and intersting. Good jov
raeee GOLD said...
on May. 22 2012 at 5:48 pm
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I really liked it!. There are a few grammatical errors (of course) and you wrote "you make my hand glued to my hand", I'm not quite sure what that meant... Other than that, I liked it. Just add a little bit more of the emotion you felt. (: