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Waterfall

January 9, 2012
By Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Try to learn to breathe deeply,<br /> really to taste food when you eat,<br /> and when you sleep, really to sleep.<br /> Try as much as possible to be<br /> wholly alive, with all your might,<br /> and when you laugh, laugh like hell,<br /> and when you get angry, get good<br /> and angry. Try to be alive. You will<br /> be dead soon enough.&quot;<br /> William Saroyan


Tumbling, laughing, dancing down a crumbling staircase.
She doesn't stop for anyone.
Around her, seasons change. Darkness grows. Terror rises.
But she dances on, unfazed, unashamed.
She smiles a little and continues
Twirling and falling, jumping and  beaming,
She doesn't care. 
Her jealous beauty is untouched
As is her heart.



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on Jan. 11 2012 at 3:15 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Luara Moncur

awesome! As I read this I could picture a girl doing just that...in her own little world unaware of her surroundings...love it!

on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:50 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
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This is nice!Lovely descriptions!Five stars :D

on Jan. 10 2012 at 3:46 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here&quot;- one tree hill

its good i like the discriptions. Try making it longer u know to get the reader more into it. but i liked it!!