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This is for Her
December 12, 2011
This is for Her
Do you love her?
More than the world?
What would you do for her?
Have you ever seen a girl like her before?
Or.....
Is she one of a kind?
Do you keep her in mind?
Or is she always out of sight
Out of mind?
Could you hold her tight
All night?
Would you fight her fights?
Would you treat her right?
Or better yet....
Could you be her knight?
Can you make her glow from her head to her toes just by kissing her goodnight?
Do you kiss her 'cuz you miss her or do you kiss her because she is you Miss?
© Sahrash C., East Windsor, CT
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This article has 11 comments.
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 10:57 am
Its not only okay its great! and i think we all as writers have those kind of poems...sometimes i write some to and am like hmm...lol but its very good!
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:37 pm
This is a great poem! Yes every girl wants to be treated right and every girl/person should. Very good poem! let me know when others get posted!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 2:50 pm
It was a good poem you just need to change the structure a bit:) Could you please comment on my work?
Branden Navedo SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 8:51 pm
Here's what I learned from writing poetry: Try to keep from writing sentences. for example: When April bends above me And finds me fast asleep Dust need not keep the secret A live heart died to keep See? Rather than complete sentences, here Sara Teasdale is using fragments in order to keep from creating some monotonous sentence.
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 11:21 pm
So true, it does seem like something eminem would rap xD i really liked this though, its exactly what i'd love out of a relationship
Cody_Goelz PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:13 am
this is a really good peice it sounds like somthing eminem would rap which is awesome keep up the good work
