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Not A Place For A Broken Soul

November 16, 2011
By ShawnaJ PLATINUM, Bismarck, Arkansas
ShawnaJ PLATINUM, Bismarck, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
If you fail once, it doesn't mean you're going to fail at everything.

It's a dark place,
For a broken soul.
A place where no one,
Really wants to go.
It's a place where love,
Doesn't exist.
It's a place where hate,
Has taken it's place.
This place souls are always broken,
No one tries to help.
A place where souls,
Have to mend themselves.
For a broken soul,
This place is hell forever.
Once a soul enters this place,
It'll never leave,
If you're a broken soul,
Don't come near this place.
Once you enter,
You won't leave it's embrace.

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on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:52 am
meadowood BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
4 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For by grace you have been saved through faith." -Ephesians 2:8a

Nice. I like how it flows, but is broken up into longer lines and abrupt shorter words.


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