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September 25, 2011
By Ella1 GOLD,
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Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:06 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
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Thanks callie15 :)
callie15 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 11:53 pm
callie15 BRONZE, North Plains, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man?"
-Chuang Tzu

"No man with a good car needs to be justified!"
-Wise Blood

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I agree with Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful. Poems that often times appear basic actually takes a lot of time: if one word seems out of place, you have to rethink the whole poem over again. Love the poem, Ella1!
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:38 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

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Thank you. :)
Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:37 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
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Thanks Lilac, I read some of your work to and it is AMAZING!
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:10 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
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hehe this made me laugh :P I want a robot now :D
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2011 at 10:48 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

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Actually, stuff like this often takes a LONG time to get right. It's great, btw. :)

-Lilac

Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:31 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
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" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

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OOOooooooo!!! Kinda reminds me of the story I'm writing. . .

 

IRUEHL SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 6:51 pm
IRUEHL SILVER, Deland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Those who start wars, never fight them
And those who fight wars, they never like them
And those who write laws, can recite them
And those who fight laws, they live and die by them

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haha looks like it took you 6 seconds :/