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Growing Old

October 2, 2011
By SahraBaraB BRONZE, Great Barrington, Massachusetts
SahraBaraB BRONZE, Great Barrington, Massachusetts
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Time is tasting our tangibility,
Wrapping skin into creases of dimly lit memories
That hold our minds together like breath
Carries us.

Our fingers rest upon bedspreads now,
As sporadic images warm our cold skin
Like flame beneath paper -
Memory burning the moans of shivering palms.

My thoughts have started to slide apart
Like tiny tangerine slices
As they ripen and soften.
Nectar swells in my eyes

And spills to the curves of my jawbone.
You kiss their quiet presence away
And remind me
Of their sweetness


For the last time.

The author's comments:
I was inspired by the few, beautiful stories of life-long love that I have heard lately.

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HeartsSahra said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 10:52 pm

 I love this so much. I don't know what kind of stories you've been hearing about lately, but I sure hope I can find love like this.

-Naomi


on Oct. 10 2011 at 11:11 pm
You have the gift, dear one. 

on Oct. 10 2011 at 4:47 pm
SahraBaraB BRONZE, Great Barrington, Massachusetts
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Thank you so much OD!! It has been forever! I hope you and your family are doing well :) much love! 

Mr. OD said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 3:11 pm
Excellent work!  This poem displays a great deal of depth and empathy.  I love the tangerine image - very fitting!

Sen said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 3:08 pm
Beautiful!

Massi said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 12:50 pm
This is beautiful, sweet and sad in the best of ways. Keep spittin!! <3

on Oct. 10 2011 at 12:04 pm
SahraBaraB BRONZE, Great Barrington, Massachusetts
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Thank you so much! :)

TrevoDman said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 12:03 pm
TrevoDman, Vancouver, Alabama
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GOOD JOB THIS POEM IS AMAZING

nono said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 12:02 pm

Wow. This poem is filled with wonder and wisdom in equal measure. I wish that the rating device was functioning properly. I tried to rate it 5 stars and it came out as one! Also, lots of people are trying to rate it are not able to... Keep writing...you are very talented.