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Do I Take My Life

August 30, 2011
By TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
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TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
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"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"

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Do I take my life
And lose all the things I love
Do I keep my life

and think nothing of
Do I stay or do I go
Follow my heart, so confused
I chose my path, life and death

my love, I chose you

© Molly L., Phoenix, AZ

The author's comments:
I felt so hated, when this was written. I would never consider suicide, but my psyche felt like that. Cold and dead. Like nothing I could do was right.
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ethan_bane_hope GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 7:20 pm
ethan_bane_hope GOLD, Willis, Texas
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there is nothing to fear except fear itself

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i like it! it short and its full of your thoughts and emotions! at first it doesnt sound like it fits together but when you read the whole thing it makes perfect sence
TubaLady DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:56 am
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, &#039;It&#039;s going to be OK. &#039; The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings&quot;

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I did feel like this, just so you know. And I felt like my emotions had been surgically removed because I was so hollow inside.
TubaLady DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 12 2011 at 3:34 pm
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, &#039;It&#039;s going to be OK. &#039; The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings&quot;

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Thank you. You're so kind.
TevoRocks said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 9:41 pm
WOW that was amazing i love it it was the most amzaing poem ever ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!
EatPrayLove BRONZE said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 8:07 pm
EatPrayLove BRONZE, Gilbert, Arizona
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awwww i'm sorry you feel or felt this way or if you know someone who feels or felt like this! I think that it's pretty amazing you can come out and write deep feelings like this just know that someone loves you even if it feels like no one does and remember something good comes out of something bad even if it takes a while you can learn from the bad experiences! Life is not easy but it's ok because it's not supposed to be if you want a good life. I hope that makes sense to you:)
clumsyteardropper SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 7:43 pm
clumsyteardropper SILVER, Roslyn, Pennsylvania
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&quot;You can&#039;t help others, if you yourself need help&quot; -my sister ;) love it!

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wow... i'm so sorry to hear that.  i felt the same way too... i pray things start looking up for you. 
Tatyana DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 6:56 pm
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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i luv it keep it up nd i hope you feel better

 

aubreylax said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 12:58 pm
this is really short. the emotion doesn't appear to be that deep because there is so little being said. You seem like you don't even have this emotion  yourself. I feel like you watched someone else feel this and theen tried to write about it, which is worth doing. But just try to elaborate more and put in a little more emotion! :)
lala(: said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 9:51 am
LOVE IT!! keep writing((: