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Some to Notice Me

August 19, 2011
By swcricket98 GOLD, Williamson, Georgia
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swcricket98 GOLD, Williamson, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable. Suffering is optional.

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I hurt
Everything around me
Overwhelms
Floods my mind
Convinces
Persuades my unimportance
To my soul

I must escape
Back to serenity
Search
Find a place
Freedom
Somewhere absent
Of problems

Seems no end
To come to me
Try
Attempt at peace
Cry
Let it out
For someone to notice me

© Mark P., Woodside, NY

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I have been through dark times in my life, and this is a way to release that experience.
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