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Black Dove

August 9, 2011
By Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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It flies in the darkness of the night.

No such light will come en-light.

In the darkness it shall fly in the northern night sky.

You shall call it a black dove,

though you know it is a crow.

it has beauty you say to me.

But in the darkness you can’t see.

As the morning grows en-light,

The big black dove turns to white.

Now you see the beauty's might,

Go watch the white bird

soar in the big blue sky!



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on Jan. 13 2012 at 3:58 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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I think its coming out in 2013, i have checked out some of the movie trailers, but I dont think they are the official trailers. :)(:

on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:45 am
Musicalartist, Xxxxx, Other
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i still love all of your writing, all of the fictions, poems, and everything!

Do you know when the Max Ride movie is coming out?


on Nov. 9 2011 at 4:17 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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thank you! and i will but i have to get off now! but i will!!!!

on Nov. 8 2011 at 4:59 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time." - Anonymous

"Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear." - Anonymous

I love the way your words flow together. I always look for that when I read poetry.  You excetucted it wonderfully.  Could you check out my short story "Playground Memories: His, and Hers"?  Thanks  <><

on Nov. 4 2011 at 11:14 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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yeah i will check out some of ur work! Thanks for commenting!!!!! :)(:

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:00 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like it, it's very creative with the perspection twists!

Think you could check out my work sometime? I've got a poem called Sowing Poppies that you might like.


on Oct. 9 2011 at 10:41 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thanks a bunch! I will check out some of your work but i have to get off now! sorry for the not responding earlier!!! :)(:

on Oct. 4 2011 at 12:25 pm
BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"It is hard to fail, but it is worse never to have tried to succeed." Theodore Roosevelt

Wow this was really cool, good job :)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:06 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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my user name is: actually now it is: jellotinisjiggly24

on Aug. 17 2011 at 3:25 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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please comment and rate. I love listening and reading it. Thanks a tons ad keep writing everyone!!!! :)(: