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July 1, 2011
By JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
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Kind words
like an antidote
to all that is ill

In one moment
I am lifted
soaring, because
of you

With one look
I am giddy,
pain forgotten,
because of you

Just one laugh
and everything is perfect,
because of you

Kind words
like an antidote
to all that is ill

© Megan M., Ashville, OH

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This poem won first place at my town library's poetry contest.
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JustEmily PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:43 am
JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
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That's HAWT!

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I just noticed that. I must have typed it in wrong. thanks for bringing it to my attention though
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:02 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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This is great! I agree with you completely, and I think you did an amazing job of getting the message through. Good job! :)
RFrocker23 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 11:44 pm
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
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This is nice! It's very precise and concise which I like about it. It just seems very clean and to the point--no dancing around the subject.
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 9:22 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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I love it. It's so true that a kind word can make everything better. There is one thing I would change, however. In the 2nd verse, last 2 lines you said "soaring,because/of you". It might be better to say "soaring/because of you". It fits the pattern you set with the 3rd and 4th verses. :)
JustEmily PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 7:17 pm
JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
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Thanks! (:
sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 10:59 am
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Very cute...And

very true..:)