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I DON’T LOVE YOU

June 5, 2011
By izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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Some days we go
Never looking back
Just as the like the wind will blow
Hopefully it will not attack.

But just as I would expect,
You come once more in my path.
Am I just a subject
In your wrath?

Arguing as usual,
Ending with the “I LOVE YOU”s
Our pretends are perpetual,
So I just agree and say my “I LOVE YOU TOO”s.

But no matter what you say
I DON’T LOVE YOU
LIKE I DID YESTERDAY,
And we both know that’s true.

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Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2012 at 9:10 am
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

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same here. haha, i've only read like three of your poems, but i like this one best so far. you have a lot, any you specifically want people to read? it bugs me because a lot of my poems that i submitted first are my best, so no one reads them cuz they're at the bottom. 
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 5:46 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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of course Izy :)
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:29 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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Thank you Brooke!!!!!!!!!!!! :3
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 10:05 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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i totally love this....
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 7:08 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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heh heh... Tank youuuz!!! xD
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 5:17 pm
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM, Cartersville, Georgia
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&quot;Sometimes people leave you...halfway through The Wood. Do not let it grieve you...No one leaves for good. You are not alone, for no one is alone.&quot; -Into The Woods

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I really enjoyed this!
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 10:39 am
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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thanks!!!! :DDDD
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 10:38 am
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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heh heh... thanks! :D
flghosthunter BRONZE said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 9:28 pm
flghosthunter BRONZE, Chiefland, Florida
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be yourself

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great work
RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:53 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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wow no matter how cliche it is the last stanza has to be my favorite part. this is a really good poem :) it kinda makes me happy :)
Resonating_Words SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 8:44 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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"I don't love you like I did yesterday"... that's awfully familiar (from a My Chemical Romance song, as well as some other places I believe.) In that regard its cliche, so I advise against it. On a related note, caps lock hurts my eyes. It's not necessary, and detracts, I believem from your words.

 

All in all its not horrid, its pretty well done. Could use some work in delving deeper and not just brushing the surface of a generic topic. But you have a great starting place to make this great.

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:55 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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YAYAYAYAYYYAYAYAYAY!!! :D
samwich7 said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:55 pm
samwich7, No, New York
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Nice. Great work

 

sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:52 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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&quot;Afterall, a loose screw doesn&#039;t want to need, and a hammer doesn&#039;t want to be needed.&quot; -Me<br /> <br /> &quot;Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely.&quot; -Me

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I really like this! Great job! ((:
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:35 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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Reaallllyy??? Thanks! :D
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:32 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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Oh my gosh! Thanks!!!
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:32 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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Thanks!       
no.name. PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:31 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I really like this. But I cannot explain why. It's very good.

 

reyess_anai BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:29 pm
reyess_anai BRONZE, Corona, California
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&quot;Every deep thinker is more afraid of being understood than misunderstood.&quot; Nietzsche

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OMG!! that's exactly how i feel. He always comes back but  I can't tell him I don't love him so I don't say anything. Btw amazing poem
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 9:16 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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Thanks SO much! :)