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April 13, 2011
By carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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my sister is really cool
Even thought she can't talk that does not mean she has nothing to say
she always makes me feel happy
some people don't understand how she is different then the rest of us
i really care about her
it makes me sad when people say mean things about her
i am so thankful my friends care about her because of who she is

© Dana D., Gansevoort, NY

The author's comments:
my sister inspired me because she cant talk at all. she cant talk cause she has a disability. most people at my school just don't understand that it hurts when you make fun of people who are like my sister
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This article has 18 comments.

carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 1:28 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks im glad u like it
Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 1:25 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

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This is great!! :D One of my sister's has FAS (Fetal Alcohol Syndrome) She was adopted from Russia, and she's so sweet, but she has to go to a special school for her disabilities.  I wouldn't want people to make fun of her.
Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 1:25 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

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This is great!! :D One of my sister's has FAS (Fetal Alcohol Syndrome) She was adopted from Russia, and she's so sweet, but she has to go to a special school for her disabilities.  I wouldn't want people to make fun of her.
Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:54 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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this is great and packed with emotion!
yazigirl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 4:49 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

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aww sweet! makes me miss my sis
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:56 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks that means a lot
byebye said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 7:55 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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I loved this poem and I love how you care so much about your sister. It shows in your writing. This line: "Even though she can't talk that does not mean she has nothing to say" ...is brilliant! Maybe talk a bit more about that. Very good! :)
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 12:02 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thank u :)
pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 7:29 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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i love the passion in this! <3
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:28 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks everyone 
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:26 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Rainbow this is so sweet. Its so nice as well. You can see that you really care about your sister. I bet this poem makes her happy.  Overall, I like.
Bella.Electra PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:25 pm
Bella.Electra PLATINUM, Phoenix, Arizona
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cute poem! very inspiring message:)
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:44 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks
Come-n-Gone GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:43 pm
Come-n-Gone GOLD, Unionville, Missouri
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Isn't it funny how it only takes a few seconds to say hi, but forever to say goodbye?

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your sister is lucky to have someone like you

 

carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:26 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks 
musicluver SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:19 pm
musicluver SILVER, Indio, California
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

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don't let people bring you down.

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Rea;;y sweet
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:23 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thanks for the feedback :)
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 1:36 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Aww, how sweet. Good job! In line 2 though, "thought" should be "though".