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April 2, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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You tell me I can't
you tell me I won't
you tell me don't ask
you act like a bloke
but I tell you
you better watch out
because your getting me really wound

© Olivia E., Alto, MI

The author's comments:
When I wrote this piece I was thinking of the people who are told they won't make it, they're nothing, and you won't have a career.I hope people will get that nobody can tell if you'll amount to something in the future.Don't be discouraged by those people who can't, won't and don't.
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:35 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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wow thanks that's sounds interesting
MidnightFire PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 10:55 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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&#039;Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow.&#039;<br /> for my sister: &#039;when life gives me lemons ... i eat them&#039;<br /> &#039;do not be afraid, be faithful&#039;<br /> &#039;God is not safe, but He&#039;s good&#039;

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Kids and adults alike are always doing that, but to our town! whats up with that? they are all like: Oh this place is a dump, this town is only filled with losers that will never leave and only make this town work. I say: well instead of complaning do something about it! ... my dad is the boss of a company that works with Microsoft, and does buisness world wide, and all from a tiny town were half the people say its trash and then do nothing ... so ya i know how this works :P
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:01 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i agree no person is going to make me stop my dreams and they never will stop until the day i stop breathing
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:16 pm
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Great poem!  Yeah, I hope that no matter how much criticism I get, I will continue to pursue my dreams.  My only criticism: 'your' should be 'you're'.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:08 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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thank you i'll look at some of ur stuff
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:38 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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I reall liked it I favorited it!!!!! :D
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 13 2011 at 12:28 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thank you tell people to check out my other poems
vampier BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2011 at 7:55 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
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&quot;my favorite thang about eating gumybares is knowing that thay wont fight you back when you bite there heads off.......!!!!!&quot;

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that is so true i thank so and i loved your poem....!!
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2011 at 6:22 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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it's very helpful thank you
alex198 said...
on May. 11 2011 at 1:35 pm
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I liked the rhythm but I think your strength when you're writing is your imagery and this didn't put that across as well as your other poems did. I think this poem would need to be longer to help the reader understand where your coming fom. Hope that's helpful :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2011 at 10:20 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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anyone plz comment i love to hear feed back