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My Hidden Words

March 4, 2011
By Bubblybubbles223 PLATINUM, Warren, Oregon
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Bubblybubbles223 PLATINUM, Warren, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
people are like tomatoes...theyre red on the inside...and fun to smash...and especially fun to throw at walls. and clowns. and annoying teachers. and pirahnas cuz they say yuck cause theyre vegetables! ~me

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Sometimes, there’s nothing to write about
And the only thing that gives you any inspiration
Is the blank page in front of you,
Waiting to be let out

Waiting to be painted, decorated
Perfected with your own words
Waiting to be alliterated
And to have purpose

Waiting for something to happen.
In your own life
That makes you want to write
About all your strife

A simple thought
A perfect design
The words that I’ve sought
I know that they’re mine

They’re mine alone
By themselves on this page
Adorned and bedecked
With my thoughts of rage…

© Alissa H., Double Oak, TX

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toria45 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 6:44 pm
toria45 BRONZE, Parma, Ohio
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I dont need easy i need possible ~ Bethany Hamilton

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omg this is like inspirational
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 10 2011 at 12:33 pm
YankeeSwagg PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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Every burden is a blessing

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love it and i can't stop reading becuz its so beautifully written.
3moh3art11639 SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2011 at 1:45 pm
3moh3art11639 SILVER, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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yep, yep, i understand its hard to write sometimes because you feel you've already written anything and everything you could write about. sometimes i just listen to music while sitting in front of my tons of notebooks, than hear a verse i really liked and write....
Chacharoo BRONZE said...
on Apr. 9 2011 at 10:18 am
Chacharoo BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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"I love you."

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This was good. This. Was good.
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 2:02 pm
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
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~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

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IMPRESSED!!!!  I loved it :D I could totally relate.  I'm glad you wrote this :D It is completely original and unique and I'm so glad I know others are out there :)  I wish I would've thought about this...Writing about having nothing to write about.  i think you have done an amazing job at making something so simple scream to be read.  Good job! KEEP IT UP!!!

Yours truly,

Alexandra

CaptainFabulous GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 12:22 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
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"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

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I feel the same problem this poem discusses often. when you feel the need to write and nothing comes to mind. I have also wrote poems about having nothing to say. great job
inactive said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 5:06 pm
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I love both the topic and rhythm of this poem. I envy those who can rhyme so smoothly.
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 11:17 am
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This is absolutly lovely, you grasp the feeling and put it into words in a beautiful way. Keep up the good work! ^_^
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:04 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

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very good! and i know that feeling. splendid
HannSawyer15 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 3:05 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

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Wow... your writing style is amazing. Do the world a favor and keep writing! Super original too! 2 thumbs up! :)