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Why I love you

March 10, 2011
By Joycileena SILVER, South San Francisco, California
Joycileena SILVER, South San Francisco, California
7 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our love is like the wind, you can't see it, but you can feel it."


Your eyes,
A beautiful brown, it gets me lost as I stare into them like I just fell in a world of sensation.
Your hair,
A jet black that goes so good with the way your style is. It makes me feel like I fell in a world of beauty.
Your smile,
I cant help but stop and smile back, because its so contagious, it makes me feel like I fell into a world of happiness.
Your lips,
They feel so soft pressed against mine, with one kiss, it makes me feel like im in a world of relaxation.
Your love,
Theres no way to describe it.



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Duane BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2011 at 3:05 pm
Duane BRONZE, Wathena, Kansas
3 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
What comes around goes around

me to I am really glad you wrote this poem 

 


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 2:48 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I can totally relate to this poem!