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Broken Battlefield
March 8, 2011
It's just a mumble
but then it changes
it turns to shouting
and then to booming
there are cracks of pain
and a silent throb
suddenly the clouds
begin to slowly sob
ripping the dark sky
into many sized pieces
over and over again
strangely it doesn't show
calming and slowing
cushioned and healing
nobody even knowing
the actual truth
© Sarah L., Glendale, AZ
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Dancergirl224 GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2012 at 9:11 am
I'm so sorry that you had to go through that, but I do agree with the others.... your poem is very very good. I love this poem because i can relate to how you felt/feel, and i could also "see" what you saw. I love reading peoms where I can connect myself to not only the poem but also the author. Great Job!!! :)
wishonastar said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 4:35 pm
I'm sorry you have/had to go through this. This is really good, though. Keep writing!
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 4:10 pm
Thankyou so much. I promise I'll check out your work as soon as I can.
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:04 pm
Thanks. you made my day! :)
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 2:32 pm
I will check out your work.
I totally understand you :(
You are very talented! Never stop writing! I hope to be seeing more of your poems :) I hope everything gets better too :))))) And if you feel it doesn't just smile :))))))))) because there is time for sadness and time for everything.. the time for hapiness will come soon!! Don't lose hope!
