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The Sweet Sensation

November 30, 2010
By Sybrina PLATINUM, Clearwater, Florida
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Sybrina PLATINUM, Clearwater, Florida
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That's what she said,what the fudge,what the fruit-loops,holy cranberries.OMG TACO'S

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The sweet sensation if you standing near.While all my temptations build up in fear.
Our hands intertwined together,like the vines of a forest,growing closer as out bodies touch. I kiss your lips,your hands locked onto my sides,God please don't ever let this moment die! I place
my hands upon your back,so smooth and warm...I kinda like that,it's dark outside but the moon shines bright in the night,that's right! The silent chirping of the crickets
from outside,making this moment seem so alive.

© Erek S., Wolfforth, TX

The author's comments:
this poem isn't finished yet but I couldn't wait to post it up on here! This poem is about love/sex but I didn't do that we just cuddled and held hands. I love you Johnny and thank you for being here for me when I needed a shoulder to cry on!
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