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Rin-ring Cre-ack

November 17, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Through the empty air I hear:
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Through the gray and coolness fair:
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
A lonely girl rocks on a swing
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Pail and unaware
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Waiting in the schoolyard there
Rin-ring Cre-ack.
Haunting grayish evenings
Rin-ring
Waiting
Cre-ack
Trapped
Rin-ring
Revenge!
Cre-ack
For the man
Rin-ring
That taught her
Cre-ack
That’s unsuspected
Rin-ring
Revenge
Cre-ack
For the man
Rin-ring…
That killed her!
Rin-ring Cre-ack!
Rin-ring Cre-ack!
RIN-RING CRE-ACK!!!

© Gina M., Marblehead, MA

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alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 3:01 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Hehe YAY I'm glad you think so! Hahahaha thank youuuuuuuuuuuu :))))))
elisianicole101 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 10:02 am
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
34 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

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Soooo i already told you that i love this and every time i read it it gets better and better(:!!!
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 4:30 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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I wrote it just because!

And I'm totally gonna check it out now!!!!!! Teehee it's that guy we were talking about? Yay can't wait to read it!!!

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 9:22 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Ooooh creepy! :) Did ya have to write this for a certain class or just because?

And I have a new one published! It's called "We've Only Just Met... And Yet" It's about that guy :) I wrote it before we were even dating, like a week after I met him :)))) (There's one more pending but it's not out yet..) Just so ya know! :)