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The way I feel

November 5, 2010
By Ninz59 SILVER, Orland Park, Illinois
Ninz59 SILVER, Orland Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Love conquers all"

Cold wind
Dark blue skies
As I walk down the street with tears in my eyes
Hands clenched
Legs tense
As I walk by the white picket fence
Wearing my heart on the sleeve
As I live naïve
No love, Just lies
I remember begging you to not leave me alone
But you don’t stay
You go
Baby, there is no difference between both
I fall to the ground
And the tears drop without a sound
I grab the weeds in between my fingers
And I can hear the last of his words in the air
They linger
I can feel death coming unto me
Just like the rhythm of a song
& as I take my last breath I glance over the picket white fence
I see that the grass has always been greener on the other side
But I never had the chance to realize it
Because the fire was always lit
& my eyes were blurry as I cried
I didn’t have a choice but to put my vision of life

The author's comments:
This is one version of this poem, I have another one that ill be putting up very soon! Tell me what you think

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