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Did you?

October 14, 2010
By Jacqueline93 SILVER, Exline, Iowa
Jacqueline93 SILVER, Exline, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If what you want doesn't want you back, then so be it. It doesn't deserve you anyways.


Did you mean what you said?
Or could you look into my soulless brown eyes, and feel nothing
Did that kiss that made my heart sink, mean nothing?
Or did you feel it too, when I gave all I had
Did you care when you seen my heart aching?
Or did you have something else, on your mind
Did that moment feel as unforgettable as it did to me?
Or have you forgotten all we had
Did you notice when I fell to the ground?
Or did you walk right over me
Did you see the world turning brighter around me?
Or did you miss me turning shades of black and white
Did you notice my eyes growing darker and darker?
Or did you never take the time to look into them
Did you feel me drifting farther and farther?
Or did you think I'd be there forever
Did you see me smiling more and more?
Or did I not flaunt it, quite enough
Did you see me get back up again?
Or did I climb too fast for you to see
Did you notice me moving on?
Or could you not see, through your own tears

The author's comments:
Everybody knows about heartbreak, but you have to get back up again and show them you're just fine. And once you've done that, you feel better than how you felt before you started out.

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on Nov. 16 2010 at 8:19 am
Jacqueline93 SILVER, Exline, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If what you want doesn't want you back, then so be it. It doesn't deserve you anyways.

thanks! im glad it helped someone else out too! (:

on Nov. 1 2010 at 6:34 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

Wow. I really needed this - it helped me more than you can know. It flows really well and I love your word choice. Amazing.