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Star ratS

September 23, 2010
By Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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Look where we
are,
love.

here.

In your bright
eyes
is all of right and
yes.

And the star rats
can scurry
on the mirror of the sky,

but we know

(now)

A vile thing
will never be alive

and you can doubt.
Do. But

forever revere.

What you see
when you look up
at where
is here.

We
know
now

the flowers...
when scrutinized by
right and yes
are (h)ours.

the star rats
may feast on
the fates of
the fallen,
making sawdust of was
and wasn't of stardust

But do not
we know

now



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on Oct. 8 2010 at 3:05 pm

Incredibly wordplay!

I really like:

"Bright, eyes" "Right, yes" I get it!