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what is past?

June 28, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."


In this empty frame I see shame.
I see a dark haunting unwelcomed past.
But then I realized something,
There is no such thing as past,
Since it's always there with us.
No matter where we go,
Past will always exist within us
And haunt us to death and beyond
Forever and ever after all eternity.


The author's comments:
i wrote it at summer poetry club when we had to look at this empty frame and write what we see.

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JOYOUS GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 5:02 pm
JOYOUS GOLD, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Personally my favorite quote is: "It's better off living for today, than waiting for tomorrow." cause I completely understand it!

Wow I really like this piece! I'll be sure to check out more poetry by you!! 

on Aug. 28 2010 at 11:14 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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i really really like the idea, but it wasn't easy to figure out what you were saying

on Aug. 22 2010 at 11:40 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

correction: at a week-long summer poetry camp :]