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God Knows

July 21, 2010
By Trebled SILVER, Gladstone, Other
Trebled SILVER, Gladstone, Other
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you imagine is real." - Pablo Picasso


Tempers boiled over,
transforming into tears.
Please just hold me.
It's all I've ever wanted.

The floor pulls down,
gravity is stronger tonight.
I try to meet your eyes,
but I only see pain.

Why can't I fix you?
God knows I've tried.
God knows I've tried.

Don't try to talk to me.
I can't think clearly.
He's clouded it too much.
Clouded it with lies, hate, dissappointment.
He hurt you,
you hurt me.

Music plays.
Empty notes.
Empty souls.

You're going to leave me aren't you?
Leave me with this?
Does that sound fair?

Of course it does.
You were never mine.
You have every right,
but I wish you'd forget about rights.

Black tears stain my face.
Don't leave me here.
Alone with myself.
Alone with God.

"I'll miss you."
But not enough,
because you won't stay.

"I love you."
"I love you."
I'll let you go,
but not really.
You never let me go.

My body shakes.
Even your arms can't stop it.
Your eyes make it worse.

I scream inside.
I bury my face.
Your shirt is wet.
"I'm sorry."
Not really.

I loved you.
God knows I loved you.
Gd knows I loved you.

The author's comments:
This was written very late one night after a painful experience with a friend. It was so late in fact, I didn't remember writing it the next morning.

This is probably left interpreted as you would see it.

Cheers.

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on Aug. 8 2010 at 8:57 am
foreveroctober GOLD, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life, he realized, was much like a song. In the beginning there is mystery, in the end there is confirmation, but it's the middle where all the emotion resides to make the whole thing worthwhile." - The Last Song, Nicholas Sparks

Wow that was amazing!!!!! Keep writing!!! If you could please check out some of my work that would be great!!! The next article after this one is mine... Please read and comment if you have time. Great poem!!!!!!!!

Trebled SILVER said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:13 pm
Trebled SILVER, Gladstone, Other
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you imagine is real." - Pablo Picasso

Oh, thank you so much... I would love to check out your work.

Trebled SILVER said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:13 pm
Trebled SILVER, Gladstone, Other
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you imagine is real." - Pablo Picasso

Thanks so much, I'll check out your work. =)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:41 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so powerful!!! awesome!!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 7:59 am
PoeticTouch GOLD, Saida, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

this is greattt, wow!! check out some of my work if u get the chance, thanks:)