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July 3, 2010
By ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

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Loves me
Loves me not
Loves me
Loves me not
Thoughts swirling round my head
In never ending circles
Loves me
Loves me not
Says he does
Does he really?
Around and around
Until I am dizzy
I guess I will never really know
If he loves me
Or loves me not

© Angel V., Tecumseh, MI

The author's comments:
I guess this is really about how “love” is just a word. Anyone can say “I love you” without really meaning it. I think it’s a question we all will have at one point or another. It is sad that a word that could mean so much really means nothing.
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This article has 4 comments.

ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 5:22 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

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ha ha. thanks :)
SilverLuna SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 5:22 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

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It's the least that I can do!(: I really enjoy your poetry. It's...sweet, i guess would fit it well. Sweet and well thought out. Always write!(:
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 5:19 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

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:)))))))))) thanks for all your comments!!!!!!!
SilverLuna SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 5:18 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

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This makes a very eleoquent point, it's like one of those ten-cent phrases. It's not worth what it used to be. I loved this. Good Job!