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June 13, 2010
By iwanttobeforeveryoung GOLD, Forest Hills, New York
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&quot;When the power of lover overcomes the love of power the world will know peace.&quot;<br /> -Jimi Hendrix

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You sit back.
You watch the water come down.
Then the soap.
Then the oddly hued wax.
Then more water.
You watch it wick away the dirt.
Years of adventures and chores.
It brings you to the exit.
It is over.

© Brittan S., Chino, CA

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Something that came to me as I was going through the car wash.
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